Dear Father




It was in 1996, when the world has turned me down,
Looked around, but there was no single soul to be found,
I was a young child, lost and baffled in the woods,
Had all the bad days, but couldn’t find any goods,
I was taught to be a survivor, and find my way home,
Couldn’t show my fears, so I pretended to be strong,
Deep down, wishing that my father came along,
Smelling the scent of his strong cologne, he used to put it on,
We were the perfect homegrown, until he left to a place unknown,
Wondering why he would leave us in this cold mess,
So I went on a journey to find his new address,
Walking barefooted, hungry and feel less –blessed,
I wrote words to express and release all the stress,
But none of these words seemed to make me relax,
Dear Father,
You told me “anger is for the weak, and patients build strengths”
If anger was a measurement, no one in this world would know my length,
Daddy I need to confess, I never cried on the day of your death,
Didn’t want to make you feel sad, so I instead toke a deep breath,
You left a mother full of tears and aches,
…and siblings with full of regret and heart breaks,
I was the youngest in the house, so you kept me from harm,
If jealousy would arouse, you would keep me in your arms,
Now, I spend most of my times in my room, in my bed,
With cold feet writing words of art, under my blanket,
I gave money out to the poor, so God would help you more,
Prayed five times, so God would open the heavenly door,
I know many continue to adore, how you gave them a life to live for,
That’s why I love you daddy, and I wish you could see,
How a daughter you raised, turned out to be,
Don’t worry aabo, I’m still aiming for the number seven,
So Insha Allah we meet, in the highest heaven,

Sincerely Yours,

Your ever-loving daughter

(Dedicated To My Father Who Has Passed Away)

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Beautiful tribute to your father May he rest in peace. You're a very gifted writer and I am amazed by your talent. Thanks for sharing your poems with us. By the way, from now on i am your number one FAN...

takecare..
Hodan..

Anonymous said...

I seriously fell in love with this one and I am stealing it...Sue me if you find me




FiFi

Anonymous said...

Manshallah.. Allah Haunaristo aabo.. And abaayo i wish u all the blessings in the world.. U are blessed with very wise words and abaayo i believe u should keep it going! God Bless!

Anonymous said...

Lns i cried readin ur poem havent talk 2 my abo 4 awhile I feel so gulity knowing that tomorrow he or I might not be alive to say I luv..get poem as always

Poeticonscious/SomaliA said...

Thank you lot for reading my poems, and I'm glad some of you were inspired by the words, which were my intensions. Continue to check on my poems, and continue to give me positive feedbacks.

Thank you,

Poeticonscious.

Anonymous said...

WOOOW THAT WAS AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL...MANAHALLAH U'VE BEEN BLESSED WIV DA POWER OF WORDS... U CERTAINLY KNOW HOW TO USE IT TOO. KEEP IT UP.

STAY BLESSED
SAL!!

Unknown said...

I am sorry for your loss! May he rest in peace....I need to tell you something..but i will call you on it..Keep up the good work!

Anonymous said...

Wow! I’m speechless my dear.
You are truly talented and this poem really took my breath away.
May Allah grant your father a place in the highest Jannah. Amiin
I just found out about your poetry skill and I am truly impressed and proud of you.
Lots of love, Lul